What Samantha Wilcoxson Learnt when Writing about Historical Figures

Next in the "What you learnt..." series of blog posts comes from historical fiction author, Samantha Wilcoxson. Samantha released the first in her Tudor England trilogy, Plantagenet Princess, Tudor Queen, in 2015 and this week sees the publication of Faithful Traitor, which continues the story of the Plantagenet remnant in Tudor times with Margaret Pole.

I was lucky enough to meet Samantha and her husband when they were visiting the UK last year and I gave them a whirlwind tour of Bath. It's always a bit of a worry when you meet someone in real life that previously you had only "met" online. But luckily, I needn't have worried, Samantha was as nice as she is talented. So I know you are in safe hands as she takes the reins of my blog today. Enjoy!

Samantha Wilcoxson with me in Bath, UK

What Samantha Wilcoxson Learnt when Writing about Historical Figures

People seem to have two states of mind when it comes to historical fiction. One wonders how we can read and write so many different books about the same people and events. The other loves the idea of bringing the past to life and is in awe of how it is done. I have read historical fiction since I was able to string words together and feel blessed to be able to write it. Along the way, I have learned a few things.

Some things are not as clear as they seem. Those who are not students of history assume that the past is known and easy to define. The truth is a much different animal, varying with the time period and setting one is researching. The Wars of the Roses and the beginning of the Tudor dynasty is a fairly well documented era, however, I was still forced to make some decisions when it came to writing about it. For example, Margaret Pole was born to the heir apparent of England and her birth and death take place on known dates. The same is not true of her children. Dates given for Ursula Pole’s birth vary by years, so I had to choose the one that seemed most likely. Then there is the famous mystery of Margaret’s cousins, the Princes in the Tower. Regardless of what an author does with this historical tidbit, there is going to be a backlash. Which brings me to my next topic . . .

People can be very touchy about their favorite historical figures. These historical unknowns mean that people form widely ranging opinions of people and events. My Elizabeth of York was quite well received for she is not too controversial. However, readers can be touchy about whether or not she was in love with her husband, Henry, or had an affair with her uncle, Richard. Reviewers either love or hate my depiction of Richard III, who may be one of the most divisive historical figures to date! Do you believe he is the romantic prince of Sharon Kay Penman’s Sunne in Splendour or the villain of Shakespeare?

I have also learned that people are rarely saints or sinners, but made up of a complex combination of personality and ambitions. While many people are written as better or worse than they truly were, I try to portray each person as realistically as possible. This seems to have been best demonstrated in my Henry Tudor. He is often characterized as cold and cruel, and one author has even written him as a rapist. I chose to create a Henry who was certain of his fate but not always sure how to carry it out or who he could trust to help him. He was a faithful and loving husband, who may have given his mother too much power over his decisions and household. He was not a glorious soldier, but he was a wise manager of assets. In short, he was a real person made up of flaws and gifts, just like the rest of us.

There are advantages to writing about real people. Not all historical fiction writers choose to write about real people. A story can be just as compelling when it is written about a nameless knight rather than a famous king. At times, I feel that I have taken the easy way out by selecting real people to write about. My outline is already prepared for me in the form of their life’s timeline.

However, I have also learned that there are disadvantages to writing about real people. Besides the preconceived notions and expectations that readers have, I do not have freedom to have these people say and do whatever I would like. As much as I may have enjoyed having Elizabeth of York force her mother-in-law to move from the Queen’s quarters next to her husband’s, it is simply not what she did.

All those writers who wish that Richard had survived Bosworth know exactly what I mean. I cannot place one of my characters somewhere they weren’t, which at times makes it difficult to include historical details without ‘telling’ rather than ‘showing.’ In Faithful Traitor, Margaret gets her news in various ways to suit her situation and the storytelling. Whether it is a secret messenger or a clandestine night ride, she has her ways.

About the Author

Samantha Wilcoxson is an American writer and history enthusiast. Her 2015 novel, Plantagenet Princess, Tudor Queen, features Elizabeth of York and was selected as an Editors’ Choice by the Historical Novel Society. This novel is followed by the recent release of Faithful Traitor, which carries on the story of the Plantagenet remnant in Tudor times with Margaret Pole. The Tudor England trilogy will be completed with the story of Queen Mary. Samantha has also published two middle grade novels, Over the Deep: A Titanic Adventure and No Such Thing as Perfect. Each of these are available on Amazon in paperback and Kindle format.

Samantha lives on a small lake in Michigan with her husband, three children, two dogs, and two cats. This crew provides plenty of good times and writing inspiration. When she is not reading or writing, Samantha enjoys traveling and learning about new places.

Connect with Samantha:
Blog: http://samanthawilcoxson.blogspot.com
Twitter: https://twitter.com/carpe_librum

Buy Samantha Wilcoxson's books:
Plantagenet Princess, Tudor Queen: (US) http://www.amazon.com/dp/B013J4PX28
(UK) http://www.amazon.co.uk/Plantagenet-Princess-Tudor-Queen-Elizabeth-ebook/dp/B013J4PX28
Faithful Traitor: (US) http://www.amazon.com/dp/B01D04CTX8
(UK) http://www.amazon.co.uk/Faithful-Traitor-Story-Margaret-Pole-ebook/dp/B01D04CTX8

Swords, Seaxes and Saxons

I have a guest post on the English Historical Fiction Authors blog today. Check it out to find out more about Anglo-Saxon swords, pattern welding, the Staffordshire Hoard and more.

Swords, Seaxes and Saxons on the EHFA blog.

An example of a pattern-welded seax blade

Interview in which I show a monk my seax!

Check out my first non-written interview. The Anglo-Saxon Monk asked some very interesting questions and got me talking about my approach to writing historical fiction, whether I am the new Bernard Cornwell (I blooming well hope so!), Fifty Shades of Grey, singing in a rock band and lots more.

He even manages to see my nice shiny seax!

Listen here: http://www.anglosaxonmonk.com/blog/get-your-seax-out-matthew

Publication day for THE SERPENT SWORD!

Today's the day!

THE SERPENT SWORD is published today by Aria, an imprint of Head of Zeus.

Thanks to everyone who's read the first edition of the book and left a review on Amazon, Goodreads or elsewhere online. If you haven't yet read it, now's your chance!

The paperback should be available very soon. The audio book will follow in a few weeks.

REVIEW: Audiobook of Kingmaker: Winter Pilgrims by Toby Clements

Kingmaker: Winter Pilgrims by Toby Clements
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I have to confess to knowing next to nothing about the Wars of the Roses, and have never been overly interested in the period. I am always amazed that people can get so het up about whether Richard III was a good king, or a ruthless despot. So, despite having heard great things about this book, I had put off reading it for longer than I should have. In the end I picked up the audio book on Audible, and I cannot believe I waited this long to "read" it.

Story:

The blurb on the book is as follows:

February, 1460: in the bitter dawn of a winter's morning a young nun is caught outside her priory walls by a corrupt knight and his vicious retinue.

In the fight that follows, she is rescued by a young monk and the knight is defeated. But the consequences are far-reaching, and Thomas and Katherine are expelled from their religious Orders and forced to flee across a land caught in the throes of one of the most savage and bloody civil wars in history: the Wars of the Roses.

Their flight will take them across the Narrow Sea to Calais where Thomas picks up his warbow, and trains alongside the Yorkist forces. Katherine, now dressed as a man, hones her talents for observation and healing both on and off the fields of battle. And all around them, friends and enemies fight and die as the future Yorkist monarch, Edward, Earl of March, and his adviser the Earl of Warwick, later to become known as the Kingmaker, prepare to do bloody battle.

Encompassing the battles of Northampton, Mortimer's Cross and finally the great slaughter of Towton, this is war as experienced not by the highborn nobles of the land but by ordinary men and women who do their best just to stay alive. Filled with strong, sympathetic characters, this is a must-read series for all who like their fiction action-packed, heroic and utterly believable.

Review:

Following my admission that I was not interested in the period in which the story is set, the audio book got off to a shaky start with a rather clunky introduction that set the scene of who was fighting who, but it seemed very forced and there were too many names mentioned in a couple of paragraphs making it impossible to really follow, unless, of course, you already knew the history. But then why would you need the intro? I would much have preferred a historical note at the end of the book, but alas, there isn't one.

After the short introduction, the story started and to my dismay, it was in the present tense. But it happened hundreds of years ago, I said to myself! How can this be in present tense? I was all prepared to give up on the book then, almost before it had started, but of course I didn't. And you know what? As if some magic spell had been cast on me, the tense the prose is written in ceased to be an issue for me as, within minutes, the book leapt to glorious life. The immediacy of the writing, the rawness of the characters, the details of the historical context, the gory battles, the touching relationships, the jeopardy, the horrors of war... After those initial moments, the book was almost perfect.

I couldn't stop thinking about the story when I wasn't listening to the book. I felt that I knew the protagonists and I shared in their anguish as each terrible incident befell them. When I got to the end, I was desperate to know more and immediately bought the second in the series, Kingmaker: Broken Faith.

My verdict?

An astounding novel. A gripping, blood-soaked trek along the muddy tracks of fifteenth century Britain.

Narrator:

Jack Hawkins adds a near perfect narration to a near perfect book. I don't often think that a book benefits from being narrated, but in this case, I think it does. Hawkins hits just the right note of earthiness and solidity in his delivery. He manages to give each character a distinct voice and accent without overdoing it. The only slightly weak accent was for the Welsh characters, but they seemed to improve as the book progressed.

Overall rating: 5 stars

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What Char Newcomb Learnt while writing Battle Scars I & II

Next in my series of "What I learnt.." guest posts from other historical fiction authors is from Char Newcomb. Not only does she write kick-ass novels set in the time of the third crusade, but she has also written official Star Wars stories and is an even bigger Star Wars fan than me, if that is possible! So, what other day could I publish Char's guest post apart from Star Wars Day?

May the Fourth be with you!

What Char Newcomb Learnt while writing Battle Scars I & II

Siege of Acre

THIRD CRUSADE

I majored in U.S. history in college and had never studied medieval history in depth, but my interest in the Third Crusade was piqued by a BBC television series. I had to know more. The Internet can be a wonderful place. (When I was a kid, I was the one devouring articles in the old – print – World Book encyclopedias.) But thank you, Internet! I immediately found links to numerous reference resources, including digitized translations of primary source materials. Working in a university library has its perks, too. Our collection had many of the texts I could not find online and our interlibrary loan department borrowed many items for me. Translations of contemporary chroniclers provided a rich history, with many details about daily life on the march to Jerusalem.

I knew I wanted to write a novel about the impact of war on two young knights. Men of the Cross (Battle Scars I) was my first venture into writing historical fiction. I had written many stories set in the Star Wars universe, and my knowledge of events, weapons, people, and politics in that galaxy far, far away was deep. Taking on a novel set during the Third Crusade meant learning a lot more than just the conflict itself or assuming I could pick up the nuances of life in medieval times from television and movies. Any writer of historical fiction will tell you of the hours of research and fact checking that accompany the writing process. For me it meant learning about the logistics of moving an army of approximately 20,000 over land and sea. Unlike European warfare, the crusaders could not live solely off the land. They would scavenge what they could, but Richard’s fleet paralleled the march along the coast, replenishing food and water, including fodder for the animals. I learned more than I ever expected about weapons and armor, battle tactics, terrain and the weather, about the politics of the time, and of course, about Richard the Lionheart. Then it was a matter of weaving the plot of my novel, Men of the Cross, into that tapestry, to have my main fictional characters present and witness to King Richard’s trials and tribulations.

Nottingham Castle

NOTTINGHAM

Book II of my series, For King and Country, takes the knights back to England in 1193 and ends following the Siege of Nottingham in March 1194. I visited Nottingham Castle in 2010, but that was almost 2 years before I knew I was going to write a novel, much less a series. I was there as a tourist and completely oblivious about the history of the Castle. I was so excited to see the gatehouse, but it wasn’t until I started researching Battle Scars II that I learned that structure was built in the 1250s, more than 50 years after the siege I would be writing. Sadly, there is very little left of what was an extremely impressive royal castle with 3 baileys and 2 stone curtain walls with a massive keep where the 17th century ducal mansion, now a museum and art gallery, sits.

Clifford Tower

YORK

York is one my favorite cities in England - magnificent Roman walls, The Shambles, and York Minster. As a tourist in 2010 I didn’t realize the significance of Clifford’s Tower to the late 12th century. Yes, I read the brochures and the signs, climbed the stairs for the great views of York, but like the gatehouse at Nottingham Castle, the keep on the motte in 1190 was a timber building that had been torched during riots against the Jewish community where 150 Jews died. When my fictional character Stephan visits York Castle in 1193, the keep has been rebuilt, but it is still wooden. The keep we call Clifford’s Tower is higher than the 12th century one and was built of stone in the mid-13th century by Henry III.  And York Castle itself – gone.

York Castle

ON THE WRITING PROCESS

It is all right to charge through the writing of a first draft. I ended up calling my first draft of For King and Country “rough” rather than “first.” It had holes and I knew that, but I did not stop to flesh things out and did not go back to fine tune or edit, just charged through to get the story down. It was exhilarating, but daunting.

Four-thirty A.M. writing sessions may have warped my brain. It wasn’t until after two thorough edits and my final read through that I discovered I had completely glossed over a little plot detail. *head-desk* Back to the keyboard I went…

Critiques from my writing group are invaluable. Whether it was a reminder to bring in multiple senses, to hold a moment longer and show a character’s reaction to a situation, or just to provide a pat on the back – I cannot thank them enough. But even with that feedback I still have doubts about my own writing.

Writers of historical fiction need to immerse their readers in time and place. It is thrilling to have all this historical background in your head, but far too easy to bowl over the reader with it.  Carefully weaving it into the fabric is what makes great storytelling.

Images

Siege of Acre (public domain) https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=3329854

Nottingham gatehouse – author’s photo CC BY-SA 2.0

Clifford’s Tower – author’s photo CC BY-SA 2.0

York Castle – by Stephen Montgomery created the original, hchc2009 edited the background [CC BY-SA 2.0] https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=11797123CC

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Charlene Newcomb is the author of Men of the Cross and For King and Country, two historical adventures set during the reign of King Richard I, the Lionheart, though her writing roots are in a galaxy far, far away. She has published 10 short stories in the Star Wars universe and written one contemporary novel. She is a member of the Historical Novel Society and a contributor and blog editor for English Historical Fiction Authors. Charlene lives, works, and writes in Kansas. She is an academic librarian by trade, a former U.S. Navy veteran, and has three grown children. When not working at the library, she is still surrounded by books and trying to fill her head with all things medieval. She loves to travel, and enjoys quiet places in the mountains or on rocky coasts. But even in Kansas she can let her imagination soar.

Connect with Char: Website | Facebook | Twitter | Amazon

REVIEW: Black Dog: A Novella by Dean Hamilton

Black Dog: A Novella by Dean Hamilton
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is a quick read that still manages to satisfy with a violent showdown and a couple of twists.

The writing is very good with a real sense of authenticity that comes from the abundance of period terms. However, I have to say I found the addition of footnotes to these terms off-putting and they detracted somewhat from the fact the novella is trying to entertain, not teach. The list of terms in a glossary or a historical note would be better than the all-too-frequent footnotes that I found I could not ignore. On the Kindle, the temptation to click the footnote links was just too much, but of course, each time I clicked, the magic of the story was broken. In the end, I forced myself to ignore the footnotes, and enjoyed the last part of the story much more as a result.

One other thing that grated on me a little was the fact that the protagonist was called Tyburn and the Tyburn Tree gallows was mentioned frequently, but as far as I could see, there was never an explanation of the link in the names. Perhaps it is just a coincidence, but I would have liked at least one of the characters to mention it.

I am being overly picky and I don't want to give the impression I did not enjoy this novella. It is a richly detailed window into the rough and violent world of Elizabethan London and great introduction to Dean Hamilton's writing.

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